Very awesome and addictive sequences you got going with these characters Foxy. can't wait for everyone else's story. you say you prbably won't use all the characters, but wait til you try and end the story, you won't want it to end so you'll end up using them, trust me. my HUNK story was only suppose to be about 6 or 7 chapters, I'm on 19 and still going, lol.
oh, and i don't see why you don't copy and paste your story here, instead of posting the link.
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