Post by Sebek Umber on Mar 25, 2008 15:44:16 GMT -5
I wanted to know what Luis was going between times when he was off to obtain the master Plaga specimen. So here is how I think it happened, the events that unfolded and the enemies he had to face to get to his final scene, enjoy the first chapter:
Luis said to Leon as he exited the cabin after helping him blow the villagers away in their effort to keep them away form Ashley, "I forgot something, you guys go on ahead." He walked out of the cabin and Leon reached his hand out and said, "Luis..." Luis saw Ada and strolled over to her casually, trying to be cool, "Hey, senorita. Got a light and some smokes to go with it to make my day?" Ada said while crossing her arms over her chest, "Where's the sample?" Luis shakes his head and says, "Okay, so we skip the foreplay. As a matter of fact, I was just going to get it, where's the love baby?" Ada said as Luis passed by, "Sounds like fun to me, just hurry up." Luis stopped and asked her, "Okay lady, where do you stand on all this exactly, what kind of group are you working for?" Ada simply replies, "There are some things in the world better off not knowing, THIS is one of them." Luis shrugged and said as he walked off, "Heh, fine, I can take a hint. I don't care who you are as long as you get rid of that old man and his religious friends." Ada sighs and Luis walks through the woods.
Considering it was night-time, the woods were not the ideal place to be. Luis could hear all kinds of noises around him, the crackling of leaves, the rustling of bushes, the smacking that the tree limbs made as the wind was knocking them together. It was hard to distinguish weather the wind was causing these or it was footsteps of others possibly pursuing him. "Hmm..." Luis knew he had to go out to the Island to that facility to get the Plaga sample, but getting it would not be an easy task. First he would have to pass through the gate to the castle, the castle itself fortified and heavily guarded by Ganados. Even if Luis got past those things, he wold have to find a way to cross the sea between them as swimming across would not be a wise option. The wind had ceased and still these was rustling in the bushes, he froze when he heard loud wolf-like growling from behind, he pulled the Red9 out of it's holster and popped a clip in. As the wolf jumped he dove aside in an effort to avoid it's fangs as they could easily tear anyone's throat out with ease. "Feisty little fleabag, aren't you?" Only one shot quickly ended the threat of the said wolf, it lies dead on it's side as Luis walked past, he said rather coldly, "Next time bring friends..." Pressing onward, Luis comes to a clearing. Some ganados working on their farming tools, one a woman with a grass cutter and one a man with a small wooden axe splitting some wood. Luis was sneaking quietly past them until he accidentally kicked a bucket full of something that smelt like rotten flesh. The man and the woman lock onto him with their scarlet red eyes and approach slowly, raising their weapons to Luis. "Ai-yai-yah. This night just keeps getting worse and worse..." He shot the man a few times and he died, but the woman kept taking bullets in her chest until he head popped off and a Plaga's head popped out, "Oh great, I don't have the time for this." He loaded another clip into his gun and fired some bullets at the Plaga, it blew up and blood spattered everywhere. "I need to find a gun and fast. I have hardly any bullets now." Luis looked inside the shack near the recent bloodbath and locked the door behind him, "Guess I'll stay here and rest a bit."
End of chapter one...
Feedback anyone? I love to be encouraged into writing, it's what keeps me going and it also makes me supper happies. ^.==.^
Luis said to Leon as he exited the cabin after helping him blow the villagers away in their effort to keep them away form Ashley, "I forgot something, you guys go on ahead." He walked out of the cabin and Leon reached his hand out and said, "Luis..." Luis saw Ada and strolled over to her casually, trying to be cool, "Hey, senorita. Got a light and some smokes to go with it to make my day?" Ada said while crossing her arms over her chest, "Where's the sample?" Luis shakes his head and says, "Okay, so we skip the foreplay. As a matter of fact, I was just going to get it, where's the love baby?" Ada said as Luis passed by, "Sounds like fun to me, just hurry up." Luis stopped and asked her, "Okay lady, where do you stand on all this exactly, what kind of group are you working for?" Ada simply replies, "There are some things in the world better off not knowing, THIS is one of them." Luis shrugged and said as he walked off, "Heh, fine, I can take a hint. I don't care who you are as long as you get rid of that old man and his religious friends." Ada sighs and Luis walks through the woods.
Considering it was night-time, the woods were not the ideal place to be. Luis could hear all kinds of noises around him, the crackling of leaves, the rustling of bushes, the smacking that the tree limbs made as the wind was knocking them together. It was hard to distinguish weather the wind was causing these or it was footsteps of others possibly pursuing him. "Hmm..." Luis knew he had to go out to the Island to that facility to get the Plaga sample, but getting it would not be an easy task. First he would have to pass through the gate to the castle, the castle itself fortified and heavily guarded by Ganados. Even if Luis got past those things, he wold have to find a way to cross the sea between them as swimming across would not be a wise option. The wind had ceased and still these was rustling in the bushes, he froze when he heard loud wolf-like growling from behind, he pulled the Red9 out of it's holster and popped a clip in. As the wolf jumped he dove aside in an effort to avoid it's fangs as they could easily tear anyone's throat out with ease. "Feisty little fleabag, aren't you?" Only one shot quickly ended the threat of the said wolf, it lies dead on it's side as Luis walked past, he said rather coldly, "Next time bring friends..." Pressing onward, Luis comes to a clearing. Some ganados working on their farming tools, one a woman with a grass cutter and one a man with a small wooden axe splitting some wood. Luis was sneaking quietly past them until he accidentally kicked a bucket full of something that smelt like rotten flesh. The man and the woman lock onto him with their scarlet red eyes and approach slowly, raising their weapons to Luis. "Ai-yai-yah. This night just keeps getting worse and worse..." He shot the man a few times and he died, but the woman kept taking bullets in her chest until he head popped off and a Plaga's head popped out, "Oh great, I don't have the time for this." He loaded another clip into his gun and fired some bullets at the Plaga, it blew up and blood spattered everywhere. "I need to find a gun and fast. I have hardly any bullets now." Luis looked inside the shack near the recent bloodbath and locked the door behind him, "Guess I'll stay here and rest a bit."
End of chapter one...
Feedback anyone? I love to be encouraged into writing, it's what keeps me going and it also makes me supper happies. ^.==.^