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Post by Wakka on Nov 1, 2007 17:18:16 GMT -5
nice
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Post by Wakka on Nov 1, 2007 17:21:21 GMT -5
but your missing conrad,Dereck,Luke, and Miguel.
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Post by hcfwesker on Nov 6, 2007 20:27:00 GMT -5
are those the names of HUNK team members. where does it say that. let me know and i'll edit the names, i've never heard their names before, UNLESS it was mentioned in the novels or some new Wesker's Report?
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Post by hcfwesker on Nov 6, 2007 20:28:32 GMT -5
Chapter 9
Umbrella Research Faciltity ...
Annette makes her way into the security office. Desperately fastening the locks, she rushes to the surveillance monitors, scanning for any sign of her husband who is now missing. All the monitor's show is dead faculty members, all Umbrella researchers and personel.
"Oh, my. How did we not see this coming?" ...
Raccoon Ground Level ...
The platform, already reaching the ground level, stays in position. The commandos all exit and are already faced with sewer maintenance personel.
"What's the meaning of this?", a maintenance employee asks the commando intruders.
Pfft! A single suppressed shot comes from Drake's silenced weapon, as he answers "Don't mind us, just passing through."
HUNK replies to Drake's eagerness, "Cool it, we don't want to alarm anyone to our presense. But, lethal force will be necessary once we're spotted."
"Yeah, i think we all got the picture after Drake's display.", Jarvis replies.
"There's a cablecar system that'll carry us to the city's sewer maintenance facility. We'll face more personel there," HUNK says and turns to Jarvis and Grimm, then adds, "Be ready, and do not hesitate." ...
Umbrella Security Office ...
Annette manages to dial out through the facility's hard lines, she contacts a known acquaintance through Umbrella's payroll in Raccoon.
"Bryan? Listen to me!", Annette pleads, "I'm sending my daughter to you. There's been a situation here. Listen to me..."
"Annette? What's going on down there?" Chief Bryan Irons asks, Chief of Police for the Raccoon Police Department, with blood money tied through Umbrella's secrets in his own town; hush money.
"Listen! They're out! I let them all out. Take Sherry, and get out of the city. I can't leave! Listen..." Annette begs Chief Irons, but the line goes dead. ...
Raccoon Ground Level ...
Grimm strips the last of blue and red colored wires from a terminal box. "That should do it for all the hardlines to and from the facility."
"Good. Now, let's get on our way.", HUNK says, "At least William or anyone left alive won't be contacting for help. Don't see how William could've survived, doesn't explain the lockdown, though."
Jarvis says, "What about the wife? We saw no sign of her or the daughter."
"Doesn't matter. Got what we came for.", Drake comments, and concludes, " I'm sure Umbrella has plans for this place once we're long gone." ...
Umbrella Security Office ...
"Bryan? Bryan?" Annette's desperate attempt to get Bryan back on the phone falls on a dead receiver on the other end. Her desperate motion catches a glimpse of movement on a monitor. "What the ...?" ...
The Virus is Moving ...
William is face down on his stomach. His body is lifeless, all but sudden twitches and muscle spasms. His right arm slings out to his side, palm down. there's a large 2 foot slit down the side of his right bicep, with a tint of yellow hidden behind the open scar. His left arm slams down and pushes his body up, as his right hand suddenly bursts open with three large two foot razor claws.
He stand to his feet. The enemy within, awakening. A victim to his own obsession and experimentaion... The G-2 mutation has taken over, and William Birkin is no more ....
Umbrella Security Office ...
"Oh my!" William, no!" Annette can only watch in horror as she knows what her husband has done to himself. "William, why?" she questions his actions to herself, and realizes in horror the G-virus's characteristics of passing embryos, "William, no! No, no... Sherry!" ...
The Virus Is Moving ....
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Post by leonscottkennedy on Dec 15, 2007 13:31:57 GMT -5
Very proffesional. I like it. 5/5 stars!
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Post by hcfwesker on Dec 15, 2007 20:12:44 GMT -5
Very proffesional. I like it. 5/5 stars! Thanks alot for reading I got about 6 more chapters to move here, but was gonna wait to see if anyone read through it. Thanks, again.
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Post by leonscottkennedy on Dec 15, 2007 22:06:08 GMT -5
No problem and thanks for the good read, it sounded like something you'd read from an actual book so I was pretty amazed by how well thought out it all was.
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Post by hcfwesker on Dec 16, 2007 13:00:03 GMT -5
I really appreciate that I'm fixing to tranfer what i got so far to the thread.
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Post by hcfwesker on Dec 16, 2007 13:00:22 GMT -5
Chapter 10
Sewage System Cable Car ...
The four commandos have made their way to cable car system that has transported them through the vast maze of the Racoon sewers with ease.
Loud metal clanks below their feet are made as they step out of the cable car.
"Alright, we just have a few more areas to pass through before we make our way to the streets", HUNK informs his squad. "Drake, me and you will take the front. Grimm, Jarvis! You teo take the rear," HUNK orders, as he hands the case containing the G-virus samples to Jarvis, "we'll clear everything ahead, guard this with your life." ...
The Virus Is Moving ...
The G-2, the G-virus created monster, climbs the rigging platform's empty silo with ease. One large clawed hand clings to metal rails as the beast's massive power climbs upward. The scent is getting stronger to it's senses as it reaches the top. Fresh blood fills the air, but the sense it hunts blocks out the smell of blood. Though, the G-virus must stop, and feed ...
Umbrella Facility Security Office ...
Annette panicly tries the receiver again in the office. But nothing. She can't dare exit the room now that she has released the B.O.W. weapons created by her and her staff. All she can do is sit, and wait ...
Racoon Sewer System ...
BLAM! BLAM! Two shots are echoed throught the sewer tunnels, HUNK acknowledges and speaks through his com radio, "What's the situation?"
Grimm replies with sarcasm, "No threat. Nothing major, just a baby alligator. Hope the mother doesn't get too upset."
Jarvis adds, "What's your situation up ahead?"
HUNK answers, "We've just made it to the main branch connecting to the Racoon Police Department. Just a few personel to dispose of. You can greet them on your way."
Drake interupts HUNK, "We should try the chopper. Should get a signal now that we're closer to the surface."
HUNK nods to Drake, "Echo-1, this is Alpha Leader! Proceeding to the Racoon Police Department Roof. Acknowledge!"
Grimm places his hand over his ear, to over hear the conversation. through static Grimm is able to hear ...
"Alpha Team? Have you retrieved the sample?"
Through static, HUNK replies, "Affirmative." Shhh, the line goes dead.
HUNK speaks through his com radio to Grimm, "We'll meet here at the rendevous point in one minute."
Grimm answers, "Rodger."
The Virus Is Moving ...
At the moment, the G-2 monster smashes through walls within the sewers as the scent it's been following has led it here. The main branch of the sewers leading to the Racoon Police Department.
In it's sights, are two dark silouettes, dressed in commando gear. One of them holding the G-virus sample.
Grimm and Jarvis turn as they here movement hurrily coming there way from behind ...
The G-2 let's out a thunderous shriek, "RAWWWWWR!"
The Virus Is Here ...
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Post by hcfwesker on Dec 16, 2007 13:01:59 GMT -5
Chapter 11
Raccoon Sewer System ...
"I got it!" Drake calls out to HUNK, as he releases the latch on the massive door leading into the basement level to the Racconn Police Department.
HUNK replies back, "OK. We're still waiting on Jarv..."
The shrieking screams from the G-2 monster echoes through the entire sewer passageway. Both HUNK and Drake head back the way they came and look around the corner.
HUNK is first to look and react, "W..W..What was that?"
"Something's wrong.", Drake impatiently says.
HUNK nods to Drake and turns and heads back in the direction of Jarvis and Grimm, "Let's check it out," HUNK leads as Drake follows, "Over there!"
Umbrella Research Facility ...
Annette scans surveillance videos, over and over, again. It's all she can do to occupy her time. Annette stares in horror as she continues to click different monitors for different sections of the Facility. Every staff member is dead, noone else is alive, and there bodies seem to have been ... ripped apart, or, "chewed on?", she mumbles to herself ...
Raccoon Sewer System ...
Grimm clutches the G-virus sample briefcase by his side as Jarvis raises his weapon at what now towers over them, coming their way. The G-2 let's out another shriek, as it sprints in their direction.
Jarvis reacts as a soldier would, fueled with terror and fear, giving the monster all it can take, "Shoot! Eat this you freak," he screams at the monster, and buries round after round of bullets into the G-2 monster.
The two alone commandoes get backed into a wall, as the G-2 is right on them.
Jarvis screams, "I'm ... not stopping it!"
"What is this thing?", Grimm asks, and can only clutch the briefcase and prepare himself for the worst. The massive claw of the G-2 flexes downward and prepares for the first strike.
The G-2 slashes right across Jarvis's face, killing him instantly; sending his limp body to the side and crashing into the concrete sewer walls. Grimm's back on the wall, he holds the briefcase up to protect the G-2's strike at him. The massive clawed right hand of the G-2 slashes across and rips the briefcase in half, breaking Grimms arms in the massive blow.
"No!" Grimm screams, as the G-2 makes one last slash across Grimm, ripping his chest open and shredding his insides with one strike.
HUNK and Drake hear Grimm's final cries. They glance at each other, "Hurry!", HUNK orders, as the two commandos make a turn at the corner of another passageway in the maze of the Raccoon sewers ...
Away, in the Sewers...
The G-2 destroys the reamins of the exposed tubules of the G-virus. Stomping the broken glass shards and what ever remains inside of them. He suddenly stops. And his senses grow stronger ... the scent that led him in this direction, not the virus, but something else ...
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